Tuesday, 5 November 2013

Snooty Prune

My favorite part was the ending because it had a happy ending. The story was about a girl called prunella and she had some one in school called Beth and she was calling prunella snooty prune. The main characters was prunella, penny, beth. The thing that I din't like was when Beth was saying snooty prune to prunella. I would make it better by: To make the have more expretion.


By Mariam and Pippa good heart 

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